Eduqas A Level English Literature ยท Component 4: Prose Study (NEA)
The Bloody ChamberAngela Carter · A Level NEA

The Stories

Story 01 of 10

The Bloody Chamber

The collection opens with its longest and most sumptuous tale, and it sets the terms for everything that follows: a marriage that is also a purchase, a curiosity that is also a kind of courage, and a way of looking that turns a woman into an object to be priced, displayed and, in the end, killed. Carter takes Perrault’s Bluebeard and does the one thing the old tale never allowed: she hands the murdered wife her own voice, and lets her live to use it.

The story

A poor young pianist, seventeen and living alone with her widowed mother, is courted at the Paris opera by an immensely rich and much older Marquis, a heavy, lily-pale, oddly still man who smells of costly Russian leather. She marries him and travels by night train to his castle, a strange amphibious place set on a rock in the sea off the coast of Brittany and joined to the shore only by a causeway the tide covers twice a day. As a wedding gift he clasps at her throat a choker of rubies, a family heirloom worn, he tells her, by an ancestor who kept it on to face the guillotine, so that the ornament arrives already soaked in aristocratic violence. He surrounds her with mirrors, undresses her as methodically as a man stripping the leaves from an artichoke, and consummates the marriage with a cold, connoisseur’s ceremony. Called away on business the morning after, he hands her the ring of keys to the whole castle, shakes it teasingly like a set of bells, and forbids her only one: the little key to a room at the foot of the west tower. The prohibition is really an invitation, a test he is confident she will fail.

Left alone, she explores. In his study she finds a library of sadistic pornography, its titles and engravings, an etching by Rops among them, teaching her exactly how he has learnt to look at her; and then she opens the forbidden door. The chamber below is his private torture room, laid out like a chapel, and it holds the bodies of his three previous wives, each killed by a different method and kept: an opera singer garrotted, a Romanian countess, and an artist’s model preserved and displayed. The key slips into the blood on the floor and the stain will not wash out, transferring itself instead to her forehead as an indelible brand. The Marquis returns early, reads the mark, and prepares to behead her with a ceremonial sword. Only the blind piano-tuner Jean-Yves, who has come to love her by her music without ever seeing her face, keeps vigil at her side. At the final moment her mother, who has sensed her daughter’s terror down a crackling telephone line, gallops onto the causeway with her hair streaming like a white mane and shoots the Marquis dead with her late husband’s service revolver, the same steady hand that once killed a man-eating tiger. The narrator survives, inherits the fortune, gives most of it away, marries the piano-tuner, and keeps the one mark she cannot lose: a red stain on her forehead that will not fade.

A closer look

Reworking Bluebeard: the victim who narrates

Perrault’s ‘Bluebeard’ (1697) ends with a prim moral about female curiosity: the wife is nearly punished for wanting to know, and the tale hangs the horror on her disobedience rather than on his murders. Carter’s single most transforming decision is a technical one. She tells the story in the first person and in retrospect, which means two things at once: the woman is no longer a mute object in a cautionary fable but the teller of her own experience, and the very existence of the narration proves she got out alive. The reader is placed inside her fear, her vanity and her dawning knowledge, so that when the critic Rosalyn Stilling argues that the true subject of the story is ‘destructive hypermasculinity’ rather than a woman’s trespass, the form has already made the case: we judge the Marquis, not the bride.

Carter refuses, though, to make her narrator simply innocent, and that is what saves the story from melodrama. The bride recognises in herself ‘a rare talent for corruption’ (The Bloody Chamber); she is aroused as well as appalled by the wealth, the mirrors and the danger. Already at the opera, catching sight of her own body reflected in his gaze, she is startled to feel herself stir, and when he shows her the Rops etching of a naked child cowering before a monocled old lecher she half-knows she is looking at a portrait of her own marriage. Guilt here is not a verdict on her but a measure of how thoroughly the Marquis’s world has taught her to see herself through his eyes. She is complicit in her own objectification because she has been given no other way to be looked at, which is a far more disturbing, and more feminist, proposition than victimhood would be.

The gaze, consumption and the pornographic

Carter wrote The Bloody Chamber in the same year as The Sadeian Woman, her essay on pornography and power, and the title story reads like that argument in fictional form. The Marquis experiences the narrator chiefly by looking, and Carter multiplies his gaze until it becomes suffocating. He inspects her ‘with the assessing eye of a connoisseur’ (The Bloody Chamber), an image that fuses the collector, the butcher and the master of a harem in a single verb. The food metaphors do the same work from a different angle: stripped for the marriage bed, she sees herself as ‘bare as a lamb chop’ (The Bloody Chamber), meat rather than person, her youth and helplessness converted into appetite. The ruby choker, tied round her throat ‘like an extraordinarily precious slit throat’ (The Bloody Chamber), makes the point violently plain: the gift is also the wound, the adornment already the execution.

Laura Mulvey’s account of the ‘male gaze’, in which the woman is ‘simultaneously looked at and displayed’, sits directly behind these scenes, and Carter dramatises it with unusual candour. When the Marquis catches the bride reading his pornography he mocks her, ‘my little nun has found the prayerbooks’ (The Bloody Chamber), aligning his sexual sadism with religious worship, so that taking her virginity becomes a rite performed on an altar he owns. Even the fairy-tale machinery is turned back into a threat: his ‘All the better to see you’ (The Bloody Chamber) borrows the wolf’s line from Red Riding Hood, reminding us that the whole collection treats looking, eating and possessing as versions of one another. It is worth noticing how the lush, seductive prose implicates the reader too; we are lured into finding the danger beautiful, which is exactly the trap the story wants us to feel closing.

The ending: maternal rescue and the question it leaves open

In Perrault the wife is saved by her brothers, men riding to the defence of a helpless woman. Carter cuts the brothers and gives the rescue to the mother, a widow of the colonial world who has ‘outfaced a junkful of Chinese pirates’, nursed a village through plague and, at eighteen, shot the man-eating tiger whose steadiness her aim still keeps. She is introduced as ‘eagle-featured, indomitable’ (The Bloody Chamber), and she arrives at a full gallop just as the rising tide is about to seal the causeway, so that the rescue is timed to the very sea. For a suspended moment the Marquis freezes with his sword raised, stopped as though he had looked on Medusa, before he roars back into fury and charges; the single bullet ends him mid-stride. At the climax the Marquis stands ‘felled like an oak’ (The Bloody Chamber), and Carter frames his defeat as a whole system giving way: ‘the puppet master, open-mouthed, wide-eyed, impotent at the last’ watches his dolls come to life, so that ‘the king, aghast, witnesses the revolt of his pawns’ (The Bloody Chamber). Marina Warner calls the story a ‘bright parable of maternal love’, and the substitution of mother for brothers is pointedly feminist: a woman is saved by a woman, and by a love that is fierce rather than decorative.

Whether that makes the tale a clean feminist triumph is a question the story leaves entirely open, and it is a productive one for coursework. Patricia Duncker complains that Carter’s heroines, however resourceful, are still working inside the ‘straitjacket’ of the fairy tale, and this narrator does, after all, end by marrying another man. Hannah Wardle and Merja Makinen answer that retelling the story from the victim’s point of view is itself the subversion, exposing the violence Perrault kept decently offstage. Notice, too, that the red mark left on the narrator’s forehead denies her the tidy fairy-tale closure: she survives, but she is not returned to innocence, and Carter seems more interested in the mark than in the wedding.

Key quotations

QuotationMethodWhy it matters
‘bare as a lamb chop’ (The Bloody Chamber) Food metaphor, simile Reduces the bride to meat for consumption; her youth and vulnerability become the source of the Marquis’s appetite, tying sex to slaughter.
‘the assessing eye of a connoisseur’ (The Bloody Chamber) Metaphor, the gaze Fuses collector, buyer and butcher; the Marquis knows the world only by looking at and pricing it, which is how the gaze becomes a form of ownership.
‘like an extraordinarily precious slit throat’ (The Bloody Chamber) Simile, foreshadowing The ruby choker is gift and wound at once; adornment and execution collapse together, so his generosity already contains her death.
‘my little nun has found the prayerbooks’ (The Bloody Chamber) Religious diction, irony Recasts sadistic pornography as scripture and the Marquis as a god to be worshipped; sexual violence is dressed as sacred rite.
‘the king, aghast, witnesses the revolt of his pawns’ (The Bloody Chamber) Metaphor of chess and puppetry Frames the mother’s intervention as a whole hierarchy overturned, not just one rescue; patriarchal control is exposed as a game its pieces can refuse.
‘eagle-featured, indomitable’ (The Bloody Chamber) Epithet The avenging mother replaces Perrault’s rescuing brothers; salvation is female and ferocious, rewriting who is allowed to hold the gun.

Think it through

  • The narrator admits to ‘a rare talent for corruption’. Does her arousal make her complicit, or does it show how completely the Marquis’s world has shaped how she sees herself?
  • Carter replaces the rescuing brothers with the mother. How far does that single change turn Perrault’s tale into a feminist one, and what does it leave unchanged?
  • The lush prose can make cruelty beautiful. Is Carter exposing the pull of the pornographic imagination, or does she risk indulging it?
  • The story ends in another marriage, to the blind piano-tuner. Is a marriage to a man who cannot look at her an escape from the gaze, or a smaller version of the same story?

Towards the coursework

This story is a rich anchor for the comparative NEA because its central concerns travel straight into all three post-2000 options. On marriage as a transaction and the control of women, set the bride’s purchase beside Nazneen’s arranged marriage and slow self-assertion in Brick Lane, or the honour codes that govern women in The Kite Runner. On sexual violence and power, the Marquis’s sadism pairs pointedly with the assault that scars The Kite Runner, letting you compare how each writer positions the reader in relation to cruelty. On journeys and thresholds, the train that carries her ‘away from girlhood’ and the forbidden door speak to the magical doors and border-crossings of Exit West, where thresholds also promise escape and risk entrapment. Your move now: choose one theme, take two quotations from the table above, and for each write a single sentence that runs from method to effect to a claim about the theme, with context folded in rather than tacked on. Keep those sentences; build the comparison on the coursework page.