Eduqas A Level English Literature · Component 4: Prose Study (NEA)
The Bloody ChamberAngela Carter · A Level NEA

The Novels

The Kite Runner

Khaled Hosseini, 2003. A man looks back from America on a single act of cowardice in the Kabul of his childhood and on the long effort to atone for it. Told across three decades and two continents, the novel binds a private story of guilt to the public history of Afghanistan, and asks whether the past can ever be made good.

The novel

Amir grows up in the most beautiful house in a prosperous quarter of Kabul, the son of Baba, a large, admired and emotionally distant Pashtun businessman whose approval he cannot win and about whom folk stories circulate, chief among them the tale of Baba wrestling a black bear in Baluchistan. His closest companion is Hassan, the son of the servant Ali, a Hazara boy with a harelip and a round ‘Chinese doll’ face, of unwavering loyalty and deadly aim with a slingshot, who is, unknown to both boys, Amir’s half-brother. The two are bound by childhood, sharing stories under a pomegranate tree into which Amir carves that they are the ‘sultans of Kabul’, and yet divided by class, ethnicity and the fact that Amir can read while Hassan cannot, a power Amir abuses by inventing tales while pretending to recite them. The novel turns on a winter day in 1975: after Hassan runs down the winning kite in the city tournament and refuses to surrender it, Amir watches, hidden at the mouth of an alley, as Hassan is raped by the bully Assef, and does nothing. That failure to intervene, and the guilt that follows, become the engine of the whole book. Unable to bear Hassan’s presence, Amir plants a watch and money under his mattress and frames him for theft, and Ali and Hassan leave the household for good.

History then overtakes the private story. The Soviet invasion forces Baba and Amir to flee, hidden in a fuel tanker, and they rebuild a smaller life among Afghan exiles in California, selling at the San Jose flea market, where Amir courts Soraya, the daughter of the proud General Taheri, becomes a writer, and watches Baba, once a giant, cut down by cancer. Years later a telephone call from his father’s old friend Rahim Khan summons Amir back towards his ‘past of unatoned sins’ with the promise that there is a way to be good again. He learns the truth of Hassan’s parentage and that Hassan has been shot by the Taliban for defending Baba’s old house, and he returns to a Taliban-ruled Afghanistan to find Hassan’s orphaned son, Sohrab, in the hands of Assef, now a Taliban official in dark glasses who stones adulterers at the stadium. The rescue is brutal: Assef beats Amir with brass knuckles until Sohrab, like his father before him, fires a slingshot, this time putting out Assef’s eye. Its aftermath is not simple, Sohrab is left mute and attempts to take his own life; the closing pages, running a kite for the traumatised boy in a park in Fremont and repeating Hassan’s old vow, offer not resolution so much as a fragile, hard-won thaw.

Methods that matter

First-person retrospective and the voice of guilt

The whole novel is narrated by an older Amir looking back, and the retrospective frame is inseparable from its theme. Because the adult narrator already knows what his younger self did, every scene is coloured by remorse and self-accusation, and the reader is made complicit in his long act of confession. The opening dates his moral ruin with fateful precision, and the personification of a past that ‘claws its way out’ establishes at once that this will be a story about the impossibility of burial. Hosseini also lets the narrator judge himself, so that the reader trusts him even as he indicts himself.

Framing, symbol and the kite

Hosseini frames the novel with kites, opening and closing on them so that the central symbol carries the book’s movement from guilt to the beginnings of atonement. In the winter tournament the boys coat their strings with ground glass to cut down rival kites, and the prize goes to the runner who chases the last one down; the kite is loyalty and betrayal at once, the trophy Hassan chases with the cry ‘For you a thousand times over’ and then guards at the cost of the assault Amir will not forget. When Amir runs a kite for Sohrab in the closing scene, the image returns transformed and the same words are spoken back, now by Amir. Around the kite Hosseini layers a dense weave of storytelling: the Persian epic of Rostam and Sohrab, in which a father unknowingly kills the son he has never acknowledged, shadows Baba’s failure to own either Amir or Hassan; the westerns the boys watch again and again, from Rio Bravo to The Magnificent Seven, supply Amir with a code of manly heroism he keeps failing to meet. Making the adult Amir a professional writer, Hosseini turns the whole novel into an act of storytelling about the uses and evasions of stories.

Real time and the shadow of history

Hosseini pins his fiction to dated, documented history, the 1973 coup, the Soviet invasion, the rise of the Taliban, the attacks of September 2001, so that Amir’s private reckoning is set inside a national tragedy beyond any individual’s control. The critic Pamela Bickley notes how the novel unfolds through this ‘real time’, and Barbara Bleiman reads its opening as a classic rites-of-passage contract with the reader, told, as one review had it, with ‘simplicity and poise’. The effect is a documentary weight: personal guilt and historical catastrophe are made to rhyme.

Comparing with Carter

The strongest ground with The Bloody Chamber is masculinity, power and complicity, and the long question of guilt and redemption. Carter anatomises male power and the female gaze that watches it; Hosseini anatomises masculinity from the inside, through a narrator shamed by his own failure to act and a father who equates manhood with physical courage. Both texts are preoccupied with the bystander and the complicit self: the narrator of Carter’s title tale confesses ‘a potentiality for corruption that took my breath away’, and Amir’s whole story turns on watching and doing nothing. Both, too, are drawn to power exercised through violence and to the possibility, or impossibility, of rescue and atonement.

The contrast is productive. Carter’s rescues are sudden and often female, the mother in the title tale galloping back with the dead father’s service revolver to shoot the Marquis on the causeway just as his sword falls; Hosseini’s redemption is slow, masculine and self-driven, earned through a beating and a long return rather than delivered in a single stroke, and it is finally a boy’s slingshot, not a mother’s pistol, that saves the man. Both are drawn to the villain who embodies power as cruelty: Assef with his brass knuckles and his admiration for genocide stands beside Carter’s connoisseur Marquis with his murdered wives and his ruby choker, each a study in the pleasure taken in domination. Carter writes compressed, symbolic, ironic tales that dismantle the fairy tale from within; Hosseini writes an expansive, sincere, historically grounded realism. A workable comparative angle: both texts present masculinity as bound up with power and complicity, but where Carter exposes and satirises male dominance from the position of the watched woman, Hosseini examines guilt and the labour of atonement from inside a flawed man, so that the collection interrogates patriarchy and the novel interrogates conscience. The theme bridges most likely to reward a full essay are power and violence, guilt and complicity, fathers and children, and redemption.

QuotationMethodWhy it matters
‘I became what I am today at the age of twelve’ Retrospective first person; precise dating (Ch. 1) The opening fixes a single childhood day as the origin of the adult self, framing the whole novel as an act of looking back in guilt.
‘the past claws its way out’ Personification (Ch. 1) Memory is given predatory life; the past will not stay buried, which is the premise of the entire confession that follows.
‘For you a thousand times over’ Refrain and motif (Ch. 7; echoed at the close) Hassan’s pledge of loyalty is spoken at the moment of betrayal and returns, transferred to Sohrab, as the sign of Amir’s redemption.
‘There is a way to be good again’ Structural hook; reported speech (Ch. 1 and Ch. 14) Rahim Khan’s promise sets the plot’s redemptive arc in motion and names its governing hope.
‘the same house, but in different spheres of existence’ Antithesis and metaphor (Ch. 3) The gulf between Amir and Baba is caught in a single figure, seeding the need for approval that drives Amir’s betrayal.
‘There’s something missing in that boy’ Reported judgement (Ch. 3) Baba’s verdict defines Amir’s sense of his own inadequacy and prepares the reader for his failure of courage.

Towards the coursework

If you pair The Kite Runner with the collection, build the essay on masculinity, power and complicity, or on guilt and redemption, and let the contrast between Carter’s watched, satirised male power and Hosseini’s inward male conscience drive the comparison. A board-style title would name a critic’s comment and then ask you to explore how Carter and Hosseini present, for instance, power and violence, or the corrupt and complicit self, in the two texts. Weave AO3 context throughout: Carter’s feminist rewriting of European fairy tale against Hosseini’s Afghanistan, its recent history, and the diaspora fiction that carried it to a Western readership.

See the coursework page for the task, the word count and how the pairing is assessed.